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Radtour shooting

I stopped like every 10 m to take a picture or more to get a panorama
the dust comes harvesters and tractors
didn't use a tripod




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Image size
1453x350px 591.31 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon PowerShot A2000 IS
Shutter Speed
1/318 second
Aperture
F/3.2
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
80
Date Taken
Jul 23, 2010, 7:19:39 PM
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

First, let me say that it is hard for me to critique this piece. Your choice of shooting this landscape in a panoramic format really works well. The vastness of the sky over the flat horizon is greatly emphasized and the leading lines of the furrows in the fields really bring my eyes to the vanishing point of the road. This shot really makes me feel that I am a part of this place, and also that the whole world is spread out in front of me.

My comments and critique are as follows. I would like to suggest working on the tones a bit. While I do like the muted aspect of the grass and the yellows of the harvest, perhaps working with their levels might add a bit more contrast and thus a greater sense of forward depth to the piece. I'd also suggest that in the next panorama which you shoot that you place the road a bit more in the frame. I think that if you included the whole bottom edge of it, it might serve to anchor the piece more firmly in the sense of travel and of being there.

All in all, great piece.

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